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Coy Gray Jay

Coy Gray Jay

Photography Photography \ Nature | 01/12/08 @969 | Penraeth | Comments critiques (29) | Views views (323)


Coy Gray Jay
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NIKON D200
Nikkor 70-210
focal length: 210mm
shutter: 1/600
iso: 500
f/6.3
 
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Alternate view of bird in upright position [1000x670 px] [108k]

Full uncropped version [1000x670 px] [120k]

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Avatar Roadrunner

 01/13/08 @025

Nice capture of Mr. Jay. Where was it taken?
Good exposure of the pale bits, despite harsh light. The lower parts are under-exposed. I also wish that branch was not covering part of the face.
Is this full frame? If not, maybe crop less tightly.
Would help having the exif.
 
Avatar MorningStar

 01/13/08 @028

...Beautiful, nice shot
 
Avatar GTO

 01/13/08 @045

Beautiful capture...top marks!
 
Avatar ThruMyEyez

 01/13/08 @085

A very good capture. A bit more space on top would be nice.
 
Avatar Penraeth

 01/13/08 @088

@roadrunner
Thanks, I updated the photo after a little shadow/highlight adjustment in PS> Indeed, the light was harsh. In most of my shots of this guy the top of his head is blown out. I also had my ISO at 500 and forgot to change it.

I do have shots where he isn't "hiding" but I liked the character of this one. I linked to a full, uncropped version and an alternate shot of the bird upright.
 
Avatar Roadrunner

 01/13/08 @098

Thanks, Sebastian. Good choice, this one is sharper than the other.

The belly, under-tail coverts look nicer now.

Seeing the branch at the top, I also understand the crop, though I think it would be better to heal it (seems like it should be very easy in this case) at give more space from top. :)
 
Avatar Penraeth

 01/13/08 @100

Yes, the branch, plus all that other very high contrast stuff in the background.

I've expanded the top a bit. I don't know if it's enough, but I didn't want to go too far from the original post.
 
Avatar taaeb

 01/13/08 @225

nice work +9
 
Avatar sdavis75

 01/13/08 @234

This capture is quite beautiful. Well composed; excellent color and DOF. Well done. +9
 
Avatar curlyhair

 01/13/08 @607

it looks like a postcard - so beautiful. Great colors and light!Great shot!
 
Avatar moserArtist

 01/13/08 @641

Nice capture!

More ordinary than your prevous post but still nice.

Would have been better to see the face more and less of the branch.
 
Avatar cupcake

 01/13/08 @717

Good work.
 
Avatar blackshad

 01/13/08 @750

excellent capture
i agree with moser... still, very good work :)
 
Avatar Daykan

 01/13/08 @804

Beautiful capture! Great composition!
 
Avatar ARZILLIER66

 01/13/08 @870

Beautiful capture!
great composition
 
Avatar Revolution1

 01/13/08 @880

very nice photo... no critiques 9/9
 
Avatar purplerose

 01/13/08 @963

Nice capture. I prefer the uncropped version, even with the branch peeking in; it gives the photo more breathing room around the bird.
 
Avatar herrwestphal

 01/14/08 @094

Great capture, great composition.
 
Avatar ceogar

 01/14/08 @205

love it. i would have loved a little more "widescreen" layout.
 
Avatar Penraeth

 01/14/08 @288

@moser
Point well taken. I thought I'd go with a safer, cute animal shot this time.

The shots of the jay with head fully in view where, in a way, even more ordinary. In this one it looks like he's being shy, hiding behind the branch but looking out with curiosity.

@purplerose/ceogar
If I were to print this I would definitely go wider. In the future I'll try to resist my desire to show the details and rely on people to look at the full linked version for that. It's hard in this format to do horizontals. I find myself choosing vertical shots simply so they'll show better.

Thanks everyone!
 
Avatar twistoflime

 01/14/08 @665

Very good. I'd remove the little spot above the head.
 
Avatar Madanapale

 01/14/08 @699

Great capture and composition!...good work!
Carlos
 
Avatar RvascoF

 01/14/08 @842

Nice capture, beautiful lighting and composition....!!!
 
Avatar zaclab

 01/15/08 @455

Nice composition, good work (thumbup)
 
Avatar L-iNC

 01/15/08 @556

Very good focus. I'm not sure what tree that is but it looks a bit too yellowish... also, the composition is slightly too right heavy for my taste. Overall I'd say 6/8
 
Avatar monjo

 01/16/08 @128

Love the composition and the pose of the Jay. Very well done.
John
 
Avatar Penraeth

 01/16/08 @226

@L-INC
You'd probably like the full version then. In that the jay's eye is near dead center.
 
Avatar workster

 01/20/08 @153

Nice compositino and pose.
Don
 
Avatar Maidith

 01/20/08 @500

Great detail. Wings are superb Everything else looks great too.
 
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  09/09/1968 (40)
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